A Horse Walks into a Bar by David Grossman

A Horse Walks into a Bar by David GrossmanA novel that works well.

“Grossman no longer writes what we traditionally think of as novels: he has transcended genre; or rather, he has descended deep into the vaults beneath. His previous book, 2014’s Falling Out of Time, a deeply personal portrait of the loss of a son, was like a prose poem; more prophecy than novel. A Horse Walks into a Bar – again translated by Jessica Cohen, who has long proved herself capable of keeping up with Grossman’s twists and turns of style – is more like a parable, about the loss of parents and the losses of a nation. As with all good parables, it requires the reader to do some work in order to understand its meaning.

“…Grossman presents the reader with the difficulty of confronting and then coming to understand – and finally to love – the deeply offensive comedian who is at the centre of the story, Dovaleh Greenstein. Dovaleh – “Dovaleh G, ladies and gentlemen, AKA Dovchick” – takes to the mic in a small club in Netanya, Israel. Middle-aged, perilously thin, wearing ripped jeans, red braces and cowboy boots “adorned with silver sheriff stars”, he starts telling bad jokes. Really bad jokes. He abuses the audience, refuses to humour them, and persuades them to join him in anti-Arab chants. He is a thoroughly appalling individual.”

But he makes it work.

“This isn’t just a book about Israel: it’s about people and societies horribly malfunctioning. But Grossman’s true interests lie elsewhere: A Horse Walks into a Bar is not a book about standup comedy. It is a book about art, and the relationship of suffering to art. “I’m a bottom-feeder, am I not?” says Dovaleh. “It’s a pretty pathetic form of entertainment, let’s be honest.” Through the character of Avishai, the judge, it’s also a book about our role as spectators and participants, about what it means to be part of an audience. “How did he do that? I wonder. How, in such a short time, did he manage to turn the audience, even me to some extent, into household members of his soul? And into his hostages?”

“Dovaleh is clearly a representative figure, yet the conclusions we are encouraged to draw from his telling of his terrible stories is unclear.”


So, how does it work? Why does it work?

It can be funny. It can be terribly sad. But at its heart, there’s a protagonist who justifies our interest in him. He has something worthwhile to say. But more importantly, the book’s author, Grossman, does. And he does it well.

Mr A



The Lonely Londoners by Sam Selvon

The Lonely Londoners by Sam Selvon“The novel, published in 1956, is set in 1950s London and concerns the group of Caribbean immigrants known as the “Windrush” generation, who arrived on the SS Windrush in 1948. A lot of them had fought for Britain in the second world war and, having found that they couldn’t settle back into their small island communities, decided to seek better opportunities in the “mother country”. Welcomed at first by the British as a source of cheap labour, by the late 50s, as their numbers grew, they became a target of racial hatred and xenophobia, and even hasty anti-immigration legislation in parliament.

“The gloom hits you from the very first sentence: “One grim winter evening, when it had a kind of un-realness about London, with a fog sleeping restlessly over the city and the lights showing in the blur as if not London at all but some strange place on another planet …” For the Caribbean immigrants whom Moses goes to Waterloo station to meet, London may well be another planet. They are welcomed by the cold weather, and a reporter asking them why they can’t stay in their home country. Their disorientation is best represented by Henry Oliver, aka Sir Galahad, who, in this harsh winter, descends from the train in a light summer suit and appears surprised when asked if he isn’t cold. As it turns out, he only feels cold in summer, and hot in winter. With this deft move, the author immediately establishes the “otherness” of these immigrants, showing you how unprepared they are for the chilly English welcome. The reader knows that sooner or later a character like Sir Galahad is going to have his illusions shattered.

“The Lonely Londoners was the first novel to take on the task of representing this unrepresented group. Because the immigrants lived on society’s fringes, not many people knew of their existence, and those who did, such as workplace foremen or employment office clerks, pretended they did not exist. At the employment office, the veteran Moses explains the ways of this new society to Galahad: “Suppose a vacancy come and they want to send a fellar, first they find out if they want coloured fellars before they send you. That save a lot of time and bother, you see. In the beginning it cause a lot of trouble when fellars went and said they came from the labour office and the people send them away saying it ain’t have no vacancy. They don’t tell you outright that they don’t want coloured fellars, they just say sorry the vacancy get filled.”

“It is this shadow group of people that Selvon’s novel forcefully thrusts into the daylight. Other writers soon followed in his footsteps, most notably Colin MacInnes, with City of Spades and Absolute Beginners. MacInnes showed how under- represented this class of people was, especially in the media: “As one skips through contemporary novels or scans over acreage of fish-and-chips dailies and the very square footage of the very predictable weeklies … it is amazing – it really is – how very little one can learn about life in England here and now.”

Helon Habila – https://www.theguardian.com/books/2007/mar/17/society1

 Yes. A great little novel. A flash of insight into the time and place. And importantly from a point of view that will be new to most readers. It is at once a warm and generous novel, like so much great literature, but also a sharp critique of much about the time, the way the world was turning then.

Mr A

The Best British Short Stories 2017 Ed Nicholas Royle

bbss17If these stories really are the best of 2017 in Britain, which story is the best of the best? If you approach such a collection with a even modicum of cynicism (is this really as good as it gets?) then it is easy to find fault with a number of the stories, the first story “Reversible” being a case in point. However the second story “General Impression of Size and Shape” (Rosalind Brown) is a great piece of writing. But then the third and fourth? And so it goes. I think one has to accept that this reading and writing business is more than a little subjective. If we are to account for classics by the weight of the general consensus being enough to swing most readers, and the brouhaha of recent release being enough to get most readers excited enough to be willing to like what they read, then the lot of the editor of the Short Story collection; especially one that claims to be good, better, or the best; is not an enviable one. How to convince the reader? Because that’s what has to be done again and again. Though Royle doesn’t bother too much about justifying his choices (what’s the point – it would only encourage quibbles upon quibbles), he boldly puts before us his estimation of what is good, and we can decide for ourselves. Daisy Johnson’s “Language”, Eliot North’s “This Skin Doesn’t Fit Me Anymore” and Deirdre Shanahan’s “The Wind Calling”, as well as Rosalind Brown’s “General Impression of Size and Shape” make it clear that Royle has found some excellent pieces of writing, even if many of the others leave me cold. Overall, a pretty good overview of the short story in Britain in 2017. Always interesting. Occasionally doing what really good literature should do for the reader.


Mr A

Five Experimental Novels That Will Inspire Any Writer

#5 Raymond Queneau’s Exercises in Style

experimental-books-writing-inspiration-5Originally written in French, Queneau’s book has been part translated, part adapted into over thirty languages. It contains ninety-nine versions of the same, very basic story.

On a crowded bus at midday, the narrator observes one man accusing another of jostling him deliberately. When a seat is vacated, the first man takes it. Later, in another part of town, the man is spotted again while being advised by a friend to have another button sewn onto his overcoat.

Exercises in Style retells this apparently unremarkable tale ninety-nine times, employing a variety of styles, ranging from sonnet to cockney to mathematical formula.

– Raymond Queneau, Exercises in Style

Generally lasting one to two pages, each retelling does something new with the story. In the ‘Cross-examination’ chapter, the events are recounted as answers to an interrogation. In ‘Comedy’ the scene is written as a play. In ‘Olfactory’ the story is told with an emphasis on the smells the narrator experienced during the events, while in ‘Asides’ the reader is privy to the narrator’s thoughts. In ‘Retrograde’ the story’s events are related in backwards order, while maintaining the same chronology:

I came across him in the middle of the Cour de Rome, after having left him rushing avidly towards a seat. He had just protested against being pushed by another passenger who, he said, was jostling him…

Importantly, not every story is a masterwork, and not every story can stand by itself. In ‘Interjections’, one of the last chapters, Queneau retells the story using only interjected sounds:

Psst! H’m! Ah! Oh! Hem! Ah! Ha! Hey! Well! Oh! Pooh! Poof! Ow! Oo! Ouch! Hey! Eh! H’m! Pfft!

Well! Hey! Pooh! Oh! H’m! Right!

What’s the point?

Exercises in Style makes many individual points about literature, but the main thing writers can take away is the sheer range of choice available to them. Queneau’s presentation of two simple events is effortless, from chapter 1 to chapter 99, and the reader is left in no doubt that he could keep going and going with no more effort.

Queneau reveals the fallacy of limited concepts like choosing between first and third person narration, proving that the choices available to the author don’t number in their twos and threes, but in their hundreds.

What’s more, Queneau shows the reader that the way in which the story is told can transform it, to the point that the same events can be recounted almost one hundred times without growing stale.

Exercises in Style also makes an important point about context. ‘Interjections’ works because the reader is intimately familiar with the narrative, and so Queneau uses the experience to comically focus on one set of details. Here he shows that if the reader can be assumed to know something, the author can pull off tricks that look incomprehensible from the outside.

Queneau’s retellings go on to illustrate points about form, sense writing, metaphor, and a host of other elements of writing too numerous to list here. It’s an example of just how many tools the writer has at their disposal.

Also available is Matt Madden’s 99 Ways to Tell a Story, in which the comic artist picks up Queneau’s challenge and performs ninety-nine visual retellings of his own simple story.

#4 Ernest Vincent Wright’s Gadsby

Ernest V. Wright’s Gadsby is a frequently maligned but much misunderstood example of ‘constrained writing’. Constrained writing is a literary technique where the writer sticks to some kind of condition, set by themselves or others, while writing a text. Wright’s condition for Gadsby was to write a full-length novel without once using the letter ‘E’.

If youth, throughout all history, had a champion to stand up for it; to show a doubting world that a child can think; and, possibly, do it practically; you wouldn’t constantly run across folks today who claim that “a child don’t know anything”. A child’s brain starts functioning at birth; and has, amongst its many infant convolutions, thousands of dormant atoms, into which God has put a mystic possibility for noticing an adult’s act, and figuring out its purport.

– Ernest V. Wright, Gadsby

experimental-books-writing-inspiration-4Originally self-published, Gadsby is 50,110 words long and lives up to the goal of its writer, not using ‘e’ once despite it being the most commonly used letter in the language. Most importantly, the writing is smooth and, while phrasing is obviously unique, the reader can read the book straight without missing the banished vowel.

What’s the point?

Every author has struggled with word choice; with not being able to find the right phrase to convey exactly what they mean. Gadsby serves as the answer, showing authors that being able to phrase things ‘just so’ isn’t essential to making yourself understood, or even telling your story well. It pulls back the focus on wording to show that it’s only one part of getting your point across.

Gadsby is also a great introduction to constrained writing, a device which can help writers achieve a whole new level of their craft. The lesson Gadsby teaches isn’t just that even the most extreme constraint can be overcome, but that treating it as a challenge can be an avenue to something better.

Constrained artistry isn’t unique to writing, and those who want to know more about it should check out the movie The Five Obstructions, in which director Lars von Trier challenges his mentor to remake the same film five times under harsher and harsher constraints, one of which is to make it in the worst place in the world without showing that place.

Of course it’s not all about extremes – you could just put a word limit on your sentences, or only allow yourself a certain number of adjectives. The point is to teach yourself to think creatively, and turn a common annoyance in writing into a springboard to greatness.

#3 Randall Munroe’s Thing Explainer

experimental-books-writing-inspiration-3Randall Munroe is a former NASA roboticist and creator of the web comic XKCD. His penchant for whimsy and hard science have often combined, most frequently on his site’s ‘What if?’ page, which provides thorough scientific answers to questions like ‘How many fairies would there be if each fairy is born from the first laugh of a child and fairies were immortal?’

In Thing Explainer Munroe sets out to definitively prove Einstein’s maxim ‘if you can’t explain it simply, you don’t understand it well enough’.

Things are explained… using only drawings and a vocabulary of the 1,000 (or “ten hundred”) most common words. Explore computer buildings (datacenters), the flat rocks we live on (tectonic plates), the things you use to steer a plane (airliner cockpit controls), and the little bags of water you’re made of (cells).

– Randall Monroe, Thing Explainer

Monroe uses this limited pool of words to explain a variety of complex machinery in a way even children can understand.

What’s the point?

Munroe’s work is another example of constrained writing, but it’s also more than that. Thing Explainer doesn’t just manage to explain complicated things with simple words – it makes those things more understandable.

Many writers would struggle to explain the Mars Rover, but Munroe uses his constrained vocabulary to focus on the key concepts behind the machine:

We sent this car to the red world near Earth so it could drive around and look at stuff for us. It’s helping us figure out whether that world ever had seas, and whether those seas could have had life in them.

Here Munroe shows that meaning is more important than phrasing, communicating more efficiently because he’s forced to really examine what he’s trying to say. Thing Explainer is a great advocate for the benefits of constrained writing, but its true value is in forcing authors to confront the idea of communication as separate from vocabulary.

It’s a difficult mindset to embrace, but when authors explore this idea they’ll find that writing issues are given a whole new dimension. It’s far easier to judge the best way to say something when you understand that you’re allowed to say it simply or even not say it at all.

#2 B.S. Johnson’s The Unfortunates

experimental-books-writing-inspiration-2The Unfortunates is a ‘book in a box’, comprised of twenty-seven unbound sections. The sections are unbound so they can be mixed together according to the book’s experimental structure:

Apart from the first and last sections (which are marked as such) the other twenty-five sections are intended to be read in random order.

If readers prefer not to accept the random order in which they receive the novel, then they may re-arrange the sections into any other random order before reading.

– B.S. Johnson, The Unfortunates

Johnson removes most of the structure from his story, using the beginning and the end for context. Since the story itself is about memory and mortality the fragmented structure works perfectly – the story is in the interplay of the memories, something that works no matter what order they arrive in.

What’s the point?

Johnson deliberately and meticulously removes almost all need for chronology within his story. This is not just for the challenge of constrained writing, but also because he viewed it as the best way to get his message across.

I continue to believe that my solution was nearer; and even if it was only marginally nearer, then it was still a better solution to the problem of conveying the mind’s randomness than the imposed order of a bound book.

The Unfortunates takes what many assume to be a vital part of a story, its very structure, and asks not just ‘is this necessary?’ but ‘can a story benefit from its absence?’ Even if you don’t think the answer is ‘yes’, The Unfortunates can still open your eyes to the possibility that it might have. By removing structure, Johnson increases the audience’s appreciation of it.

The Unfortunates prompts the reader to ask if the rigid structure of fiction is actually false – something real life never offers – and therefore a barrier to believability. It’s a relatively safe way to explore your own presumptions about the unwritten laws of writing, and shows that the only thing that stands in the way of doing things differently is a writer who can imagine what that might look like.

David Hine and Shaky Kane’s The Bulletproof Coffin: Disinterred takes this idea and runs with it, with one issue of the collection made up of eighty-four panels of art, many of which include speech or narration. Some panels seem to follow each other in a clear narrative, while others could be forced to, or have similarities that invite the reader’s own interpretation. Hine and Kane encourage the reader to cut up the pages and arrange the images in their own narrative, forcing them to confront not just the concept of structure, but that of theme, imagery and even the physical item in their hands.

Here the author is asked to transgress against their own property, destroying something to fully appreciate it, but the last entry on this list is one where the author asks the reader to transgress against the story itself.

#1 Chuck Palahniuk’s Invisible Monsters Remix

Originally an unusual but structurally regular novel, Invisible Monsters benefitted from Palahniuk’s eventual fame when he decided to revisit the text and adjust it to what he claims was its original intent.

experimental-books-writing-inspiration-1Invisible Monsters Remix chops up the original story, presenting it in short scenes which end with a request to skip to another page. Readers follow the attendant directions, being sent to one page or another and continuing the story from there.

This would be labyrinthine enough, but there are actually hidden sections in the book that readers can’t find without breaking the rules. To get the full story the reader has to abandon the author and go looking, not just party to Palahniuk’s own flouting of physical continuity, but rejecting the shattered path he’s left in its place.

That was my original plan for Invisible Monsters. Even after the reader reached the words “The End” she’d still sense she hadn’t read it all. The book would still hold some lingering secrets… That’s how I originally wrote this book. It was packed with jumps. Hidden secrets. Buried treasure.

What’s the point?

Invisible Monsters Remix takes the ultimate chance for a work of art: that people won’t see it. Palahniuk hides content knowing that not all his readers will encounter it, accepting that the significance this lends the hidden work is worth the trade.

This has to be one of the final taboos of writing, and one that many authors will never dare confront. It encourages writers to think about what they value in a story, and about their own place in their work. If the reader can have a better experience without the author then should the author recuse themselves from the experience?

Even if the answer is no, writers are forced to confront their own continuing influence within their work. This is a blind spot for many authors, but well worth investigating.

In Mark Z. Danielewski’s House of Leaves, multiple authors are credited with writing different parts of the book. Real-life celebrities are attributed with fictional interviews, shadowy editors encroach via footnotes, and eventually a character within the book begins to read a book of the same name. In a novel that plays with what’s real, what isn’t, and how fiction can bridge the gap, it’s a haunting effect, and one only achieved because Danielewski is able to limit his presence and fictionalize much of his efforts.

Invisible Monsters Remix shows writers that this kind of story is possible, not just questioning multiple facets of storytelling but bringing the writer’s attention to their own role and how it can be played with.




Miss Brill, Marriage à la Mode & The Stranger by Katherine Mansfield

Miss Brill, Marriage à la Mode & The Stranger by Katherine Mansfield“Miss Brill” is a little masterpiece. Such economy and punch. Exactly what an excellent shot story should be. The other two also work the same way – and are more memorable than the famous “Miss Brill” – their lasting effect perhaps more to do with the way the reader is so adeptly guided and manipulated, and put down at the end with a soft and deadly bump.

Mr A



The 7th Function of Language by Laurent Binet

The 7th Function of Language by Laurent BinetAnother great novel by Binet.

A good review:


It’s funny. And it’s silly. It’s downright stupid. But also, it’s so wise. Taking the likes of Barthes, Foucault et al, to task, traducing their theories, then taking them seriously only to make fun of them, lambasting them, but ultimately taking them seriously, Binet asks us to once again consider the origins of Structuralism and Post-Structuralism, which have led academic thinking to where it is today, in order to get us to accept, once more, the important points inherent in this approach: language is powerful it’s sticky and messy, it’s misleading and it’s the answer. And everything is language, in so far as it has meaning. And then, most importantly for me, this is a novel that works, that has the trust of the reader, and by respecting the reader, it delivers a rewarding experience.

Mr A


The Atrocity Exhibition by J G Ballard

The Atrocity Exhibition by J G BallardWhat is this? On reading it, one may well wonder. Once can ask oneself: what is it for? What is it trying to do? Who is it written for? What is the author about? Indeed: what is a novel for? If it is for playing a little game with one’s self, a game of no consequence, a game with the most abstruse rules and the vaguest of ends, a game that will have little or no impact on the reader, over and above prompting a host of questions the author has already answered elsewhere, or has since attempted to answer in notes to the novel book in this revised edition, but which will not be answerd in the novel itself, questions as rudimentary as what is happening, to as profound as why do I persist, at all, as a reader, or even as a sentient being… Well, to be fair, Ballard’s novel, in and of itself, doesn’t prompt these questions, they are prompted instead by the fuss and the blather that surround this novel, as well as the more experimental novels of this period in English: so in this experiment, what is being attempted? Rather than pushing the boundaries of fiction, if indeed there are any, Ballard has succeeded here in merely pushing the limits of what the reader will put up with. The reader will, I think, put up with a great deal, just so long as she’s let in on the joke. But the joke shouldn’t be on her.

 The commentary on this novel is surprisingly thin on the ground. But I didn’t look too far:

 “The Atrocity Exhibition is split up into sections, similar to the style of William S. Burroughs, a writer whom Ballard admired. Burroughs wrote the preface to the book. Though often called a “novel” by critics, such a definition is disputed, because all its parts had an independent life. “Why I Want to Fuck Ronald Reagan,” for example, had three prior incarnations: in the International Times, in Ronald Reagan: The Magazine of Poetry, and as a freestanding booklet from Unicorn Bookshop, Brighton, all in 1968. All 15 pieces had been printed and some even reprinted before The Atrocity Exhibition was published.

“Each chapter or story is split up into smaller sections, some of them labelled by part of a continuing sentence; Ballard has called these sections “condensed novels”. There is no clear beginning or end to the book, and it does not follow any of the conventional novelistic standards: the protagonist (such as he is) changes name with each chapter or story (Talbert, Traven, Travis, Talbot, etc.), just as his role and his visions of the world around him seem to change constantly. (Ballard explains in the 1990 annotated edition that the character’s name was inspired by reclusive novelist B. Traven, whose identity is still not known with certainty.)

“The stories describe how the mass media landscape inadvertently invades and splinters the private mind of the individual. Suffering from a mental breakdown, the protagonist—a doctor at a mental hospital—surrenders to a world of psychosis. Traven tries to make sense of the many public events that dominate his world (the death of Marilyn Monroe, the Space Race, and especially the assassination of John F. Kennedy), by restaging them in ways that, to his psychotic mind, gives them a more personal meaning. It is never quite clear how much of the novel “really” takes place, and how much only occurs inside the protagonist’s own head. Characters whom he kills return again in later chapters (his wife seems to die several times). He travels with a Marilyn Monroe scorched by radiation burns, and with a bomber-pilot of whom he notes that “the planes of his face did not seem to intersect correctly.”

Inner and outer landscapes seem to merge (a Ballardian specialty), as the ultimate goal of the protagonist is to start World War III, “though not in any conventional sense” – a war that will be fought entirely within his own mind. Bodies and landscapes are constantly confused (“Dr. Nathan found himself looking at what seemed a dune top, but was in fact an immensely magnified portion of the skin area over the iliac crest”, “he found himself walking between the corroding breasts of the film-actress”, and “these cliff-towers revealed the first spinal landscapes”). At other times the protagonist seems to see the entire world, and life around him, as nothing more than a vast geometrical equation, such as when he observes a woman pacing around the apartment he has rented: “This … woman was a modulus … by multiplying her into the space/time of the apartment, he could obtain a valid unit for his own existence.””


The Atrocity Exhibition by J G Ballard 2The Atrocity Exhibition (1970)

In 1966, New Worlds, a British science fiction magazine edited by the writer Michael Moorcock, published a “condensed novel” by JG Ballard titled “The Assassination Weapon”. Moorcock was, he remembers, “delighted” to receive Ballard’s copy. “It was exactly what I’d been looking for and I demanded more. He complained I was making his eyes bleed, turning them out. For me it was exemplary, a flag to wave for authors and readers.” Later that same year New Worlds published “The Atrocity Exhibition”, which would become the title story of Ballard’s most notorious book.

In 1970 the American publisher Doubleday agreed to print an edition of Ballard’s condensed novels under that title. Marc Haefele, a young Doubleday editor at the time, remembers that a few weeks before publication, the company president was touring a warehouse in Virginia when the book was drawn to his attention. On the spot, he gave the order to pulp the entire print run. A British edition went ahead, but it wasn’t until 1972 that an American edition was published, under the title Love and Napalm: Export USA.

Whatever the guardians of public morality found so hard to stomach about The Atrocity Exhibition, it was surely more than dirty words and lèse-majesté. The novel presents fragments or avatars of a traumatised man, variously named Travis, Travers, Traven, Talbot or Talbert, who is conducting some kind of spun-out scientific experiment, which also takes the form of a lecture or media spectacle. Traven is both a researcher and an experimental subject or patient in an institution where white-coated medical science has become contaminated by other things: pornography, celebrity, the imminence of violent disaster. He is observed by one Dr Nathan and has a highly fetishised sexual relationship with Karen Novotny or Catherine Austin or Coma, names for a blank, damaged woman who often seems to be constructed from fragments of female celebrities – Jackie Kennedy, Elizabeth Taylor, Marilyn Monroe.

The Atrocity Exhibition visits terrible violence on these female celebrity bodies, in the form of plane and car crashes, nuclear fallout, disasters of all kinds. Ronald Reagan and the car-safety campaigner Ralph Nader get the same treatment. The book’s obscenity, the reason it still has the potential to shock, is a function of its objectivity. It is clinical when, for decency’s sake, it ought to feign emotion. It looks on our sacred treasures, our culture’s real sacred treasures – the imaginary bodies of famous people – and responds with all the violence and lust and revulsion that the healthy well-adjusted citizen suppresses. Decency is what separates rational economic actors, dutifully maximising their personal benefit, from the racaille, from scum. It is the source of order. Ballard’s fictional refusal of it was – and remains – a threat.

Each section of The Atrocity Exhibition is a flight over the same apocalyptic landscape, a landscape that is also the human body, observed with a clinician’s eye as it undergoes trauma, as it is anatomised, penetrated, cut and crushed and humiliated, scorched and fucked. This body-landscape is also an image of itself, a mass-media projection made up of Hollywood movies and pornography and news footage of the Vietnam war. Living in the shadow of disaster, Travers is an exemplary modern subject. The only difference between him and the average suburbanite is that he doesn’t disguise his abjection. He is a burnt-out case, a celebrity stalker, a kind of psychological crash‑test dummy with a detached professional interest in the brick wall that’s about to make contact with his skull. He may, of course, also be insane.

The Atrocity Exhibition is a melancholy book, fixated on something terrible that it can’t let go. Its landscape is both dead and accelerating, a windblown desert strewn with the wreckage of modernity that is at the same time a place of unbearable speed and intensity. In 1964 Ballard’s wife Mary died suddenly of pneumonia, leaving him to bring up their three children alone. In 2007, when he was already terminally ill, I interviewed him. “I was terribly wounded by my wife’s death,” he told me. “Leaving me with these very young children, I felt that a crime had been committed by nature against this young woman – and her children – and I was searching desperately for an explanation … To some extent The Atrocity Exhibition is an attempt to explain all the terrible violence that I saw around me in the early 60s. It wasn’t just the Kennedy assassination … I think I was trying to look for a kind of new logic that would explain all these events.”


The Atrocity Exhibition by J G Ballard 3The Atrocity Exhibition by J.G. Ballard – Reviewed by Ted Gioia

What slasher films are to cinema, J.G. Ballard’s books are to literature.  Violence is put on center stage, not for condemnation or edification, but for the sheer adrenalin

boost of ‘exhibiting’ severe damage inflicted on people and objects.  Yet the peculiarly repulsive flavor of Ballard’s narratives comes from their constant juxtaposition of violence and precision.  One of the most frequently used words in The Atrocity Exhibition is “geometry”—it appears every few paragraphs in this pseudo-novel. (Example: “In his face the diagram of bones formed a geometry of murder.”)  “Algebra” runs a close second.  For some reason, trigonometry and calculus get a reprieve.

And it’s not just math.  Ballard also draws on the jargon of engineering, technology

and medical science, usually in strange, new contexts, imparting an austere,

textbook coldness to the maimings, woundings and couplings that provide

most of the meager storyline in this controversial novel.


In his introduction, Ballard tells his readers that they do not need to read these fragments sequentially, and can even skip passages that don’t “catch their eye.”  In a normal narrative, such an approach would make it hard to follow the plot, but no worries, mate (as my Aussie friends say):  there is no plot in The Atrocity Exhibition,  although its deranged protagonist—who is perhaps a doctor at a mental hospital, or maybe a patient—has aspirations of setting one in motion.  His goals are ambiguous, and seem to range from harmless staged re-enactments of violent acts to the actual launch of World War III. But readers expecting a clear (or even vague) explanation of motive or intent, let alone the unfolding of a narrative, will be disappointed.  You could almost imagine Ballard removing all the paragraphs that moved the story forward, leaving us with the remainder as milestones on a road to nowhere.

Roland Barthes once explained that he liked to construct his books out of fragments because the surprise, excitement and jouissance of a new start imparted a sense of momentum and delight to his works.  The fragment, he believed, “implies immediate bliss: it is a phantasm of discourse, an opening of desire.”  Ballard relies on the same technique, but I suspect his excitement came from the sudden way these fragments could end—with a car crash, a corpse, a “wound profile.”  Instead of Barthes’s bliss, we get Ballard’s bloody mess.

Ballard borrows many of his most peculiar and irritating techniques from the Alain Robbe-Grillet playbook: killing off a character who returns inexplicably later in the book, changing a character’s name for no decipherable reason, returning to the same incidents over and over again as if plots could suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorders. If he aims to unsettle his readers—and with this author, that aim is a given, no?—he may have some justification for these maneuvers, but the very context undermines Ballard’s gambit. In a more structured work, such radical touches would be disturbing, but in the context of The Atrocity Exhibition they merely add to the general incoherence—just as the piling up of acts of violence serves to reduce rather than magnify their impact on the reader.

Of course, Ballard has his explanations, invariably placed in the accompanying notes to the text. The corpses, he assures, aren’t necessarily corpses, and so we shouldn’t be surprised if the dead rise again and deliver enigmatic dialogue in a later chapter. Their bloody, strewn bodies simply represent, in Ballard’s lexicon, “Alternate Deaths” which are staged by the protagonist (i.e. the fellow whose name changes from time to time in the novel). These “Alternate Deaths” —a new way of dying?—”take place partly in his own mind and partly in the external world,” Ballard helpfully explains.

Okay I get it now: the corpse is only ‘partly’ dead. Sorta like the proverbial gal who was ‘a little bit pregnant.’ And, hey, if radioactive material (another Ballard favorite) can have a half-life, shouldn’t people be allowed to have a half-death?  But even if the geometry is right here, I have doubts about the biology.  Call me old-fashioned, I’d still like to see a coroner’s report and find out what the presiding forensic pathologist makes of  this ‘Alternate Death’ business.

But the most characteristic sign of this author’s style is the insertion of some extravagant proclamation, comparison or metaphor that grabs our attention, but usually only through its idiocy.

Some examples:

“In the post-Warhol era a single gesture such as uncrossing one’s legs will have more significance than all the pages in War and Peace.”


“What our children have to fear are not the cars on the freeways of tomorrow, but our own pleasure in calculating the most elegant parameters of their deaths


“Christ’s crucifixion could be regarded as the first traffic accident.”


“One looks forward to the day when the General Theory of Relativity and the Principia will out-sell the Kama Sutra in back-street bookshops.”

I give Ballard credit for reaching for extreme effects, but the payoff never arrives.  His reports of “sexual congress with a rear exhaust assemble” sound like the kickoff for a third-rate dirty joke, as do his grotesque chapters on Ronald Reagan and John F. Kennedy—which caused so much controversy at the time of initial publication, but now just fall flat.  Reading “The Assassination of John Fitzgerald Kennedy Considered as a Downhill Motor Race” one wonders who would find this amusing or interesting or exciting or even well-written. “The starting point was the Texas Book Depository, where all bets were placed on the Presidential race….Kennedy was disqualified at the hospital after taking a turn for the worse. Johnson now continued the race in the lead….”

The most inspired and perceptive writing in The Atrocity Exhibition comes in the notes to the “chapters,” added by the author in 1990, rather than from the text itself. Here Ballard offers up aperçus and aphorisms of a higher order.  He wonders whether future visitors from outer space will consider swimming pools as “votive offerings to the distant sea.” He enters into insightful discourses on celebrities—noting  that Mae West resembles a figment of Andy Warhol’s imagination (and suggesting that she anticipated the pop artist’s oeuvre), or that Richard Burton was typecast as Faustus since, in his later years, he had the look of a man “who had made the devil’s bargain and knew he had lost.”  And I can nod in appreciation at this writer’s lament: “it is still easier to describe the tango or the cockpit take-off procedure for a 747 than to recount in detail an act of love.” Then again, that was before the rear exhaust assembly arrived in the mail.

In these brief passages, Ballard makes me wish that he had taken a different path here. No, I don’t want a more coherent or sanitized version of this rambling story— frankly I don’t think The Atrocity Exhibition could be turned into a successful novel, even with the most radical Michael Jackson-type of reconstructive surgery —but rather would have delighted in a series of essays on the pop culture figures Ballard skewers in this book. Instead of giving us lame fantasies about Elizabeth Taylor and Marilyn Monroe, Ballard should have delivered a creative deconstruction akin to Barthes’s Mythologies. He had the capability and bravado to do that, perhaps to an unparallelled degree among his generation. But, as it stands, the best sections of The Atrocity Exhibition are those snippets where the authorial voice shifts in the direction of non-fiction.

I’ve read many novels over the years, including more than a few that have been banned and burned by outraged citizens, but The Atrocity Exhibition was the only one that made me want to wash my hands after finishing it. I purchased my dog-eared copy used through the mail – the book is out-of-print (are you surprised?) and only second-hand paperbacks were available—but I often found myself wondering what kind of creepy person had owned this deliberately repulsive book before me. Sad to say, future owners will probably wonder the same about me, and go in turn to wash their hands.

But the person who, no matter how much scrubbing and rubbing, won’t be able to wash off responsibility for this book is Mr. Ballard himself. So much more the pity.  A good writer, and sometimes a great one, he did neither his readers nor his own reputation any favors with this grotesquely sensationalistic volume.  An Atrocity Exhibition?  Yes, well at least it’s aptly named.


The Riverside Quarterly, Vol 6, No 3, August 1975

The Atrocity Exhibition by J G Ballard 4The Atrocity Exhibition by Nick Perry and Roy Wilkie (University of Strathclyde)

In 1970 Ballard published in the United Kingdom The Atrocity Exhibition (Jonathan Cape, London). We are informed that sections of the book had already appeared in such journals as Ambit, Encounter, ICA Eventsheet, International Times and Transatlantic Review, which would at least indicate that Ballard was seeking a wider, or different, audience for his short stories. Secondly, the idiosyncratic style Ballard was developing in The Terminal Beach and The Assassination of John Fitzgerald Kennedy Considered as a Downhill Motor Race is now confirmed into a format where paragraphs are titled, incidents described apparently at random, and characters behave in strange ways without being strongly located. And whereas The Wind from Nowhere, The Drowned World, and The Crystal World have a conventional layout, one can, with the advantage of hindsight, identify the beginnings of this formal innovation in The Drought (The Burning World, in the U.S. and Canada). Its 42 chapters provide a clear contrast to the other novels, which are of similar length but consist of 8, 15, and 14 chapters respectively. Ballard himself has asserted his dissatisfaction with “linear systems of narrative”. In a Third Programme interview with George MacBeth, reprinted in The New S.F. (London: Hutchinson, 1969), he said:

“I’d been using in my novels and in most of my short stories a conventional kind of linear narrative, but I found that the action and events of the novels in particular were breaking down as I wrote them, that the characterisation, the sequence of events, were beginning to crystallise out into a series of shorter and shorter images and situations… What I feel I’ve done in these pieces of mine is to rediscover the present for myself — I feel that one needs a non-linear technique, simply because our lives today are not conducted in linear terms. They are much more quantified, a whole stream of random events is taking place.” (p. 46)

Thirdly, Ballard had by 1970 acquired enough of a literary reputation to be the subject of “one-off” reviews in the columns of the “heavy” British Sunday papers and the “quality” dailies. Hitherto, with the creditable exception of Kingsley Amis’ appraisal of The Drowned World he had, like all other science-fiction authors, been reviewed along with a bundle of five or six other books. Science-fiction authors continue to be reviewed in batches but Ballard’s publication by Encounter, Ambit, and Transatlantic Review appeared to be his rite de passage into the ranks of the literati.

The first nine “stories” in this collection convey a feeling of continuity –in fact, read like this and not as individual items in different magazines and journals, they almost suggest notes for a novel — by referring to characters, incidents, events, scenes, and images that appear and reappear. The central character is variously named Traven, Talbot, Tallis, Trabert, Travis, Talbert, Travers. (Some of these names had appeared in Ballard’s previously published work.) At the interview quoted earlier, Ballard commented:

“Yes, in effect they’re the same character, but their role in the stories is not to be characters in the sense that Scobie, let’s say, or any other character in the retrospective novel is a character, an identifiable human being rather like those we recognize among our friends, acquaintances, and so on.” (P. 47)

But, of course, in this case, informing us of what the character is not, in not very helpful in explaining in what sense they are characters.

“They make up a composite portrait of this man’s identity. in this story I was examining the particular role that a twentieth-century Messiah might take, in the context of mid-twentieth century life, and I feel that he would reappear in a whole series of aspects and relationships, touching an enormous range of events; that he wouldn’t have a single identity, in the sense that Jesus had — he would have a whole multiplex of contacts with various points.” (P. 49)

The central character, then, appears in many of these short stories in a composite role, and one might make a case for saying that the continual change in his name reflects his persisting uncertainties about his own identity.1 In the title story he appears as a scientist. In the second story, “The University of Death,” he is a lecturer who is suffering extreme stress and anxiety. In “The Assassination Weapon” he is a former H-bomber pilot. In “You: Coma: Marilyn Monroe” he is someone recovering from a mental breakdown. In “Notes from a Mental Breakdown” he is connected with space flights. In “The Great American Nude” he again appears as an instructor in an institute. In “The Summer Cannibals” no reference is made to any occupation. In “Tolerances of the Human Face” he is again referred to as working in the institute.

The activities of this central character constitute the core of the book, and scattered throughout the text are interpretations of his behavior. For example:

Talbot’s belief — and this is confirmed by the logic of the scenario — is that automobile crashes play very different roles from the ones we assign them. Apart from its ontological function, redefining the elements of space and time in terms of our most potent consumer durable, the car crash may be perceived unconsciously as a fertilizing rather than a destructive event — a liberation of sexual energy — mediating the sexuality of those who have died with an intensity impossible in any other form: James Dean and Miss Mansfield, Camus and the late President. (p. 29)

In the world that Ballard’s hero explores nothing is quite what it seems. For Travis, his wife and the patients at the hospital are “as unreal as the war the film companies had restarted in Vietnam” (p. 11). When a psychiatrist can claim that “the fact that an event has taken place is no proof of its valid occurrence” (p. 46) what is being challenged is our conventional notions of what constitutes a fact, an event, proof and validity. This is confirmed in the next chapter (story?) when the psychiatrist steps down from a silent helicopter, and begins to speak to Tallis:

His mouth worked silently, eyes fixed on Tallis. He stopped and then began again with an effort, lips and jaw moving in exaggerated spasms as if he were trying to extricate some gumlike residue from his teeth. After several intervals, when he had failed to make a single audible sound, he turned and went back to the helicopter. Without any noise it took off into the sky. (P. 55)

A few pages later an exchange between a girl called Coma and Tallis includes the line, “I saw the helicopter this morning — it didn’t land” (P. 58). Coma’s matter-of-fact acceptance of a woman’s dead body in the flat is acknowledged only by a glance at Tallis. His justification for the killing is his claim that “She was standing in the angle between the walls” (P. 58) and thus was “an unbearable intrusion into the time geometry of the room” (P. 57) 2. Such scenes and such prose are patently vulnerable to parody, but this silent helicopter and unconsummated conversation, like a film without the soundtrack, this matter-of-fact acceptance of a strange abstracted murder, are representative of the proliferation of bizarre scenes and events in The Atrocity Exhibition. Whereas in Ballard’s earlier work the questionable status of conventional notions of reality was often a conclusion to be drawn, it here becomes a self-evident starting point, an accepted “fact” rather than an emergent property.

In the relationship between subject and object, between the knower and what he knows, Ballard’s attention is on the subjective, on the knower. What he implies is that when advertising and the visual media in some meaningful sense are the world — then the concomitant multiplicity of images provides a challenge to conventional notions of an objective reality that has clear-cut and tangible attributes. Both the emphasis on the visual media and The Atrocity Exhibition’s format indicate a tutelary nod in the direction of McLuhan, but a McLuhan transformed by a metaphysic that is peculiarly Ballard’s.

For him the importance of the media is that they make possible a meeting and a fusion between the private fantasy and the public event — ”a coincidence between inner and outer landscapes.” The media transform the meaning of public events in ways that participants or onlookers might not recognize — this much has become a commonplace. Ballard’s claim is that the private fantasy, the subjective, is not so much transformed as vindicated by the media. The disapprobation conventionally attached to subjectivism is thus misconceived, being predicated upon an unduly delimited conception of the objective for coping with the world in which we live. Although the book explores landscapes quite different from the steaming jungles and salt flats of his previous work, Ballard’s epistemology remains constant,

In The Drowned World Kerans has been appalled by the re-emergence of the drowned city, a horror given voice by Beatrice’s plaintive “It’s like some imaginary city of Hell” (p. 121). Kerans had flooded the lagoon in an effort to reconcile his “inner” mental state with the external environment. Although Kerens inhabited a post-disaster planet and an imaginary future, whereas Travis lives in a pre-disaster world and a fictional present (however interpreted), Ballard’s latest hero is driven by the same compulsions. His situation is identified in italics:

In the suburbs of Hell Travis walked in the flaring lights of the petrochemical plants. The ruins of abandoned cinemas stood at the street corners, faded hoardings facing them across the empty streets.” (P. 17)

Whereas the reappearance of London’s long submerged streets was a temporary phenomenon, Travis’ suburbs of Hell prove much more intransigent. Nature (and a few strategically placed sticks of dynamite) was on the side of Kerans. Travis has no such powerful ally, and is thus dependent upon the resources he can muster from within himself. A synopsis of the “psychologic” that this involves reads as follows:

1) The distinction between what is real and what is fictional in the outside world has broken down.

2) Owing to the absurdity of the world, the absence of fixed determinate values, the only relevant measure of meaning is subjective conviction. Traven is committed to a quest for some ontological fortress that can provide him with the certitude that the world cannot give.

3) He finds that certitude in the celebration of personal violence and sexual perversity.

 4) Although the external world does not make sense, sense can be wrung from it by the selection and combination of apparently unrelated items in strange ways that confirm and exemplify Traven’s subjective certainties. The artifacts, imagery and public events of the external world thus become the raw materials from which Traven constructs a private world.

 5) The continuing recalcitrance of the external world, (including other people), its (and their) refusal to yield to such inner logic both disturbs Traven and provides his guide for conduct. Inner and outer worlds must be reconciled, and only the outer world can be modified.

What the reader is offered, therefore, is a grand tour around the central character’s obsessions, expressed in what is almost a private code, a vocabulary of images organised in obscure combinations. Traven’s efforts to make sense of the world find their special expression in the creation of “scenarios.” The particular meaning assigned to that term by Herman Kahn and his associates no doubt accounts for its employment:

A scenario results from an attempt to describe in more or less detail some hypothetical sequence of events. Scenarios can emphasize different aspects of “future history”.3

Ballard is fond of such associations. It also suggests Genet. The sexual scenarios that are a specialty of the brothel in The Balcony have their counterpart in the world outside its walls. The private fantasies of Madam Irma’s patrons, their masquerades as bishop, general, or judge are an innocuous mirror of public life — the “perversions” of the latter are much more disturbing, its illusions sustained at much greater cost. For Genet as for Ballard the meaning of public events, the trappings of responsibility must be re-evaluated and their connexion with private fantasies made manifest. Ballard’s scenarios consist of a collage of events, objects, media images, and characters, with the staging of car-crashes as the characteristic method of apocalyptic unification. The extent to which Ballard’s own sympathies lie with his central character is indicated by his readiness to act the part of Traven in a short film called Crash that the BBC screened in early 1971; during 1970 he had a sculpture exhibition at the London New Arts Laboratory Gallery on the theme of crashed cars; during 1969 he paid for a series of advertisements in Ambit that were similar to those which Trabert supposedly places in Vogue and Paris Match (p. 66). There was no doubt more than a hint Dali-style publicity involved in this latter enterprise (Ballard has elsewhere claimed that the painter is a genius), but the links between author and character are willingly displayed.

Throughout most of the stories is a psychiatrist Dr. Nathan, whose role is an interpretative one. Ballard said of him In the MacBeth interview:

“He appears as a psychiatrist. He relates to the other psychiatrists in the other stories, who serve the role of analysing the events of the narrative from the point of view of the clinical implications.” (p. 47)

By implication, Ballard is suggesting that Nathan’s analysis is correct — at least in clinical terms. He is, however, a character about whom we are told very little, and yet references to his smoking habits occur time and time again. His “gold-tipped” taste is pointed out on at least six different occasions (pp. 9, 25, 65, 73, 104, 117) and further references to his smoking supplement these (pp 13, 34, 42, 65, 107, 114). When the stories were separately published this kind of thing wasn’t evident. When they are collected together and published as a novel it looks like an opportunity lost. If one wished to be coy about it, one could list the quotations, add a cigarette case and suggest that they make up a composite portrait of the psychiatrist’s identity.

Certainly the irony of The Atrocity Exhibition is the shear sameness of it all. Nathan is not a well thought-out figure; his role is ambiguous and this emerges less as a function of the attempt to build a character, than of Ballard’s unwillingness to pass up an opportunity to plead Traven’s point of view. From the outset Nathan declares that he doubts whether the distinction between the doctor and patient is valid any longer (p. 13), but in the early sections of the book his interpretations of Travis’ behavior do maintain a measure of academic detachment and disassociation (see, for example, “In Death, Yes” (P. 34) and “Einstein” (P. 48)). In the fourth chapter/story he makes an effort to communicate with Tallis, an effort that is singularly unsuccessful (as the quotation from p. 55 given above indicates). But now he understands a little better, sees the world more nearly through Tallis’ own eyes (for example, p. 65). Thus after a scenario has been staged, “Dr. Nathan decided not to speak to him. His own identity would seem little more than a summary of postures, the geometry of an accusation” (p. 80). By the time we have reached the eighth chapter/story Nathan considers Traven’s “problem” is everyone’s problem, and appears to approve of, or at least acquiesce to his solution. Thus:

“Traven’s problem is how to come to terms with the violence that has pursued his life — not merely the violence of accident and bereavement, or the horrors of war, but the biomorphic horror of our own bodies, the awkward geometry of the postures we assume. Traven has at last realized that the real significance of these acts of violence lies elsewhere, in what we might term ‘the death of affect.’ Consider all our most real and tender pleasures – in the excitements of pain and mutilation; in sex as the perfect arena, like a culture bed of sterile pus, for all the veronicas of our own perversions, in voyeurism and self-disgust, in our moral freedom to pursue our own psychopathologies as a game, and in our ever greater powers of abstraction.” (p. 104)

Nathan’s subsequent argument that the Vietnam war does not repel us but in fact “appeals by virtue of its complex of polyperverse acts” (p. 107) and should, therefore, be recognised as socially beneficial, is an extension of this same theme.

Finally, chapters/stories 10, 11, 12, and 14 in the novel/collection express such ideas without the presence of a “character” at all. They employ the language of the scientific report, but each paragraph is prefigured by a phrase that refers to some aspect of Traven’s fantasies or fears. Each chapter is about three or four pages long, with Traven’s fantasies making up just one or at most two sentences. A typical paragraph begins:

The optimum auto disaster. Panels consisting of drive-in theatre personnel, students and middle-income housewives were encouraged to devise the optimum auto-disaster. A wide choice of impact modes was available, including roll-over, roll-over followed by head-on collision, multiple pile-ups and motorcade attacks. The choice of death postures included (1) normal driving position (2) sleep, rear seat (3) acts of intercourse, by both driver and passenger (4) severe anginal spasm… (pp. 138-9)

Harold Rosenberg provides a somewhat relevant comment:

America masks its terrors behind patterns of fact. Here the intolerable discloses its presence not in the grimaces of comedy or tragedy but in the bland citations of the scientific report. Since The War no novel or play has given body to the larger disturbances of the American consciousness. Literature, one hears, is dead, or too enfeebled to risk arduous adventures. Nevertheless, documents keep appearing that touch upon apprehensions equal to any in the history of men. Computations of the daily incidence of outlawed sex in America’s bedrooms; records of scientific sadism practiced by governments and their programmes to transform the will of individuals; estimates by atomic technicians of the flimsiness of the earth and of the natural shape of the human body. When phenomena of this order are explored in a work of the imagination, its author tends to be exiled to the colony of “morbid intellectuals.” Given the form of the report or survey, and authorized by the rhetoric of the professions, the most alarming topics overcome the handicap of their profundity and enter into the conversation of solid men of affairs.4

Ballard has recognised this tendency and is prepared to comment on it — ”for Traven,” comments Nathan, “science is the ultimate pornography” (p. 48) — for he shapes the authoritative character of such reports to his own purposes. By interweaving this style of narrative with the expression of Traven’s subjective concerns, Ballard is insisting that Traven is the “representative” for psychological processes which are characteristic of our time. For the reports claim to refer to the responses of, amongst others, mental patients, witnesses of the Kennedy assassination, soldiers, housewives, students, and psychotic children. Typically, they are written so as to confirm Dr. Nathan’s early assertion that the distinction between doctor and patient, between sane and insane, is no longer valid (p. 13) and his final claim that Traven is the forerunner of many others (p. 107). At times the language of the reports is almost interchangeable with what we have come to expect of Nathan in the first chapters. For example (P. 33):

These studies confirm that it is only in terms of a psychosexual module such as provided by the Vietnam war that the United States public can enter into a relationship with the world generally characterised by the term “love.”

Whether Nathan is supposed to be their author may appear to be largely idle speculation — except that it would imply that the book is more of a unity than its form suggests. Perhaps the central character is supposed to have written them, for Nathan does mention “Talbot’s deliberate self-involvement in the narrative of the scenario” (p. 27) but then references to Nathan’s report writing also occur on several occasions (for example, p. 15 and p. 45).

A number of women appear and reappear throughout the book. The central character has a wife, Margaret, who appears in three of the stories; there is a colleague of Nathan’s who appears in six of them, four times as Catherine Austin, once as Claire Austin and once as Elizabeth Austin. Most frequent of all is Karen Novotny — she is in seven. None of them is to be identified by any distinguishable physical characteristics, although the implication is that they are all reasonably attractive. They are, however, distinguished by the roles they play, and by their place in the fantasies of the central character. Margaret Traven emerges as a conventional wife caught up in a situation that she does not understand, initially unable to contact her husband and subsequently unable to communicate with him, irritated and confused by both Nathan (p. 68) and one Captain Webster whose role appears to be something akin to providing a watching brief on the whole business for the sake of the C.I.A.

Dr. Austin is Traven’s lover; he has an “undecided affair” with her (p. 11) in which she has the status of an object “an obscene masturbatory appliance” (p. 24). But she is also a doctor, with the detachment that such an occupation implies, as well as having become the lover of Koester, a research student (cf. p. 79). (Koester disturbs Traven not only because he is Catherine’s lover, but also because he is creating “scenarios” of his own — in particular, a kind of 20th century crucifixion in which Traven has the leading part. Koester is a research assistant who has learned well.)

If Margaret represents the wife who doesn’t understand, and Catherine Austin an unfaithful academic mistress, Karen Novotny, the third woman of these stories, represents the sensual and the erotic.

Talbot followed her about the apartment drawing chalk outlines on the floor around her chair, around the cups and utensils on the breakfast table, as she drank her coffee, and lastly around herself:

 (1) sitting, in the posture of Rodin’s “Thinker,” on the edge of the bidet, (2) watching from the balcony as she waited for Koester to catch up with them again, (3) making love to Talbot on the bed. He worked silently at the chalk outlines, now and then rearranging her limbs.” (P. 32)

Their period in the apartment together had been one of almost narcotic domesticity. In the planes of her body, in the contours of her breasts and thighs, he seemed to mimetize all his dreams and obsessions.” (p. 64)

Typically, it is Karen who picks him up in an empty hotel cinema after a conference on space medicine, or on a motorway, or at a beach planetarium, or on top of a car park, or at, a demonstration cinema on facial surgery.

In identifying what these three women “represent,” we must bear in mind one point. It is what they represent to the central character that is important, and their places in his pattern of obsession. All of them are “killed” at least once, Karen Novotny most frequently of all, and both these deaths and the curious way in which their sexual activities are described are purportedly explicable in terms of Traven’s efforts to make sense of the world — or more precisely his world. For example:

Amatory elements: nil. The act of love became a vector in an applied geometry. (P- 75)

This is explained by Nathan thus:

“Talbot has accepted in absolute terms the logic of sexual union. For him all junctions, whether of our own soft biologies or the hard geometries of these walls and ceilings are equivalent to one another. What Talbert is searching for is the primary act of intercourse, the first apposition of the dimensions of time and space.” (p. 78)

There are a few other “characters’ besides those mentioned, Kline, Coma, and Xero, for example — a trinity who appear to be wholly the product of Traven’s fantasies. They usually appear together and enjoy no objective status independent of the central character’s perception, creatures of the imagination employed in, and the expressions of, his strange purposes:

A watching Trinity. Personae of the unconscious: Xero: run hot with a million programmes, this terrifying figure seemed to Trabert like a vast neural switchboard… Coma; this beautiful but mute young woman, madonna of the time-ways, surveyed Trabert with maternal eyes.

 Kline: “Why must we await, and fear, a disaster in space in order to understand our own time? – Matta” (p. 64)

The Atrocity Exhibition is by any standard a strange book but it does not represent a total break with his previous work. The form is different and the specific elements that now make up the landscape are technological much more often than they are natural — Ballard is here concerned to come to terms with technology. The imaginary natural landscapes of the future have become the artificial landscapes of the present. And yet what is the “real” continues to be problematic. As Karen Novotny explains, “We’re all in the movies.”


The Atrocity Exhibition by J G Ballard 5Hmmmmmm. It’s hard to know what to make of a work of fiction that doesn’t work as fiction. Indeed, one that tires hard not to, constantly undermining itself whenever it even fleetingly gets off the ground. In no other area of human enterprise, outside of art, is it considered appropriate, useful or in any way laudable, to undermine what you’re doing as you go about it. An athlete inducing a heart attack in himself, a soldier shooting himself, a builder smashing bricks on his head (all apposite metaphors for this work) but in art it’s what is done, what needs to be done, and what is done again and again, in more and more sustained and imaginative ways. Could another work of fiction as bad (where “bad” means bad, i.e. doesn’t work at all) as this be written?

 Of course it could. But are the bland pointless fictions that proliferate even worse? And the cliché-dredging, over sentimental, trite and shallow novels that bulge out of newsagents on Railway Station concourses and Airport terminals, are these a bigger problem than the pointless splurges of J G Ballard? Yes. But when the cutting edge of fiction is not only blunt, but soggy, which way goes the rest?

 If there are experiments to be done, who is to do them? How are they to be done? How should failure be dealt with? And what would success look like?

 Experiment indeed!


Mr A